High School Writings – A Single Drop of Water

My Uncle Alvin passed away when I was in elementary school. I will never forget my father’s sorrow. I wrote about his sorrow in my eleventh grade creative writing class. I transcribed the poem in its original form below. On a lighter note, oh how my writing could have benefited from a few commas and semicolons.

In memory of Alvin Herbold. My father’s brother and mentor

A Single Drop of Water

A single drop of water,

not much compared to

an ocean, or lake,

a river, or stream,

a pond, or even a puddle.

There is something fascinating

about a drop of water.

It can just be a part

of a great ocean,

an unnoticed part,

a part that is made

unimportant by the millions

surrounding it.

Or it can be that

single tear drop

on my father’s face

when his brother died.

The strong man I know,

filled with sorrow.

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